Beginner writer looking for some feedback and support.

Hello everyone, hope you all are doing great today. For a while now I have been playing with the idea of getting into writing. At the time I didn't really have the time due to work and other obligations, but now I've been able to make the time to give it a shot. Already started on my first work, a bit of a fanfic so all you anime/manga fans may like it. Hope you all give it a read and please leave comments with your honest opinions. Will also be posting additional chapters on patreon for those who really like my work and can't wait for the regular updates. Link for my work can be found here: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Caribbean_Night Link for my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/FanfictionGalore844